A good teacher is like a shining star to students。 Miss Li， my senior middle school English teacher， is a shining star in my life.
　　When I began my senior middle school years， I had difficulty in learning English。 I dared not speak English aloud in public because of my poor pronunciation and intonation。I could not get high marks and grammar was not right at all。Afraid of being lanughed at，I never put up my hand to answer questions in English class。When Miss Li found out my situation，she encouraged me and lent me a hand，which rapidly improved my English。With her help，I became interested in English and eventually got high marks.
　　Miss Li，like a shining star，shines in my path of success.
　　一顆閃亮的星
　　一個好老師對學生來說就像一顆閃亮的星。李老師，我高中時的英語老師，就是我生命中的一顆閃亮的星。
　　剛上高中時，我英語學得很吃力。我不敢在公開場合說英語，因為我的語音、語調(diào)彳艮糟糕，英語成績彳艮差，語法一塌糊涂。害怕被嘲笑，所以英語課上我從來不舉手回答問題。李老師發(fā)現(xiàn)我的情況后，向我伸出了援助之手，并鼓勵我。這一切使我很快提高了英語水平。在她的幫助下，我漸漸對英語感興趣了，成績也提高了。
　　李老師，就像一顆閃亮的星照耀著我前進的道路。